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Alpha Aquil

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So i was practicing a bit...
got a new character out of it by accident x,D
This android is called 'Alpha Aquil' and he is addicted to hoodies. 
he would do everything for a hoodie. ö________ö
Yes this strange black part on his hoodie resambles stylized wings ( for him being named Alpha aquil ( Alpha Aquilae, the star 'Altair'(=flying eagle) in the star formation eagle.)

I could not figure out what systemcolour he should get.. at first it was only this pinkred. then it got out of hand. i am sorry. 

i love him ö______________________ö
I .. i just do- don't know why..

Drawing by me, character belongs to me
do not steal, trace, upload somewhere.
Do NOT USE WITHOUT my permission 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Aye captain, I'm here for a critique. I want to clarify that I'm still a newbie in the world of digital painting, so probably something may be wrong. What will I leave is my personal opinion <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Let's begin!
Vision: why 3 stars? In the general view, unfortunately attracts me more the background, so bright compared to the character, my eyes are more captivated by the intense red and orange. Diverting attention from the main subject of the artwork.
Originality: the wings are so damn EPIC on the sweatshirt. I would order about 7 sweatshirts with that design! I really like how you made his eyes so detailed, I can see drawings inside his irises. I also really like the work you've done on its marks, which are also detailed and complicated (I would never have patience to do things like this I admit it!)
Technique: his hair are so BEAUTIFUL! I've always loved that kind of painting for the hair, I like the individual strands so much! As I said before I love the design of symbols, clean-cut and whole.
Impact: 3 stars as the vision, because yeah, the background, if I have to say myself, is too much bright. Maybe next time try to add some lights around the characters contours so that it is more organic and smoothly merged in the background!
Best wishes!!